my comments:
- battlescape HUD: there are texts on pictures as I see which cannot be translated
- equip screen: the shape of backpack and holster not visible enough. Player could get the impression that they're 5x3 and 3x2 sized.
- (main) menus: Green text is hardly visible on the yellow striped buttons.
Otherwise it's good. Maybe you should take a look into menuscripts if you haven't done yet.
-geever