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Bonzo:
Chapter 18 is up!
Cyber Killer:
I read all current 18 chapters over the past few days on my ebook reader (using dotepub I converted the webpages to epub files) and I had quite a lot of fun. The only criticism that I'd give right now is that there are sometimes too few descriptions of what is happening over too many dialogues. Especially when there's a lot of action (like in chapter 12) I found myself wondering where the characters are and what are they doing, also who is speaking.
Waiting for more :-).
Bonzo:
Thanks for the feedback Cyber Killer! I'll make sure Gary sees it.
Your reward is... chapter 19 being up!
Cyber Killer:
Cool :-).
Bonzo:
Chapter 20 is online, and has the best title of anything ever.
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