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Sirine

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Re: Chinese Translation (Simplifed)
« Reply #15 on: June 26, 2009, 04:57:16 am »
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Eighty-seven hours after the initial attack on Mumbai, Earth declares war. For two weeks, the armies of humanity each try to fend off the mysterious alien attackers to the best of their ability. They score precious few successes.

Eighty-seven hours after the initial attack on Mumbai, Earth declares war.
孟买被袭击的过去87个小时后,地球正式向异性宣战。

For two weeks, the armies of humanity each try to fend off the mysterious alien attackers to the best of their ability.
在接下来的两个星期,人类的军队克尽所能的阻挡异形的袭击。

They score precious few successes.
然而,成功屈指可数。

【全文协调性】
孟买被袭击的过去87个小时后,地球正式向异性宣战。在接下来的两个星期,人类的军队克尽所能的阻挡异形的袭击。然而,成功屈指可数。


Yellow Color = 词不达意,寻求改进
Orange Color = 初级满意,寻求共识
Green Color = 共识达成,就用这个囖。