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Danimal:
Hi, im new around here but willing to help a bit, since i have learnt how to use blender not so long ago i will try to do small objects and such. Any constructive critic is welcome  ;D .


NEW MODEL


I finally got some time to retake this model, so the first thing i did was to made a minor modification on it (piston and rail guides on the lower side) plus some cleaning on the mesh that resulted in less polis used. Currently i have the model almost textured, but since im still figthing my way with blender texture baking option it may take some time. As always contructive critics welcome.  ;)


469 vertex and 477 faces total.





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Mattn:
i like the model - but it's up to winter to decide whether it really fits

i'm sure he will post his opinion soon

thanks for the work

Mattn:
what is the polycount?

Winter:

--- Quote from: Danimal on January 14, 2008, 04:42:48 pm ---Hi, im new around here but willing to help a bit, since i have learnt how to use blender not so long ago i will try to do small objects and such. Any constructive critic is welcome  ;D .
--- End quote ---

I have just a few criticisms.

1. The blood cartridge is too small, and the handle shape is too odd and ends up too thin at the back. It looks simply too fragile to take the hard pneumatic slam of the needle.

2. The rest of the body, however, simply doesn't look alien enough. It needs some more inspired shaping.

Another suggestion is to shorten the 'needle' part at the front by about half, to give it a proper pneumatic-driven look.

Regards,
Winter

Danimal:
Thanks for your opinion, ill wait for the dungeon master aproval  ;)

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